Had some tears yesterday. I’ve been thinking of the lyrics to “Gabriel’s Song” and whether there should be another verse.
I started to write one out. The sensible story from what Matt already put in place is Drew announcing Gabriel’ birth. We’ll see if that actually works out for the rhythm and pace of the other verses.
[Momma. I had a dream” A little voice said.
[ The top of him not rising above the bed.
Verse 2 [I had a dream we had another baby boy
[and we named him “Gabriel”.
Do I talk about his (Drew’s) insistence? Do I talk about Joan’s resistance? What do these memories do for the story, if anything?